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10 April 2007 @ 08:24 pm
Need Fic Edit by April 30 [Transformer/Human]  
As the title says, I need help editing this fic for a challenge over at </a></font></b></a>mecha_erotica by April 30, suggestions for improvement, etc.  The challenge was for a TF/non-TF, and I have an interest in Buffy the Vampire Slayer, so I crossed it with my TF fandom, Beast Wars.  Again, any suggestions that come up...please help.  (Uh, warnings: PG-13, no detailed sex)

rough draft HERE
 
 
 
Ghost of the Navigator: Decepticonnavigatorsghost on April 11th, 2007 07:09 pm (UTC)
I'm not sure I can help with suggestions for editing, per se, but I just wanted to say I actually really liked this. It's interestingly different and while it's quite a random crossover, you handle it pretty smoothly. Nice going - I'd say post it!
greedyslayer: A Smile to Light up the Worldgreedyslayer on April 11th, 2007 11:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much; your comment suggests that my fic is pretty much heading the right direction with entertaining you. ^____^ Glad you liked it.

Point there...BtVS/Beast Wars has to be one of the most random crossovers, clearly only coming into existence because a person (me, in this case) likes both of them. Though I've always thought if considered hard enough, any crossover can work, and figuring out at least the beginning mechanics of mixing the two was fun--thank God for Buffy's seer-dream quirk (that sadly seems to lessen in the later seasons). And for the fact that Buffy and Dinobot both basically died in a way relatively emotional and heroic to the audience, and that they both came back basically screwed for a while.

Again, many thanks. :)